Not sure why you're unable to see a comment, weird 'cause none of them are screened! But re the fic -- SO CUTE! Arthur's post-coital giddiness was adorable and aww the boys are ridiculously ~in love~. Dunno how seriously you'd go with the writing, but I actually really liked the in-dream ideas you explored in the beginning and would totally be interested in development of that, even if it resulted in something less porny. =D